The film I am doing a journal about is the boy in striped pyjamas. So,there is a boy called Bruno and his dad is about to get promoted from being a soilder to a captin of a group of the nazzi. So, Bruno and his family all move houses but Bruno’s mother doesn’t want them to live near a camp that the Germans put the people in. One day Bruno went throw the garden were a shed was with a window that leads a path towards the concentration camp. Once Bruno got there was a boy named schmall and he was a kid in the camp with his dad that is lost or dead somewhere in the camp. A few weeks later Bruno had started going to see schmall constantly with some food for schmall to eat. On the day schmall asked Bruno if he could come in to the concentration camp to help him look for his dad, so Bruno said yes so he went in to find his dad. Then sadly one day his family recognised that Bruno haf disappeared then they realised that he went through the gate to the back yard so they ran but the time they got there Bruno was dead. That is my film journal.

December 7, 2015 at 10:30 am
Hi Josh,
Not a bad first go, although remember to use capital letters for names.
This basically retells the plot, so can you make sure that you correct it so that you give more of your personal response.
A guide to how to do this is here:
http://achieve.community.edutronic.net/stage-one-reading/wide-reading/
December 13, 2015 at 2:24 pm
My personal opinion is that it is a very good sad film and it is a very understanding film of you have a good understanding of these types of films that is my opinion on this film Mr price